增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Today I'll talk a little bit about Italian culture. Music plays a important role in the culture of Italy. Italian music is heavy influenced by its history. And the piano and the violin are said have been invented in Italy. Italians are fond of spend time with their families. In the old days, Italian families were used to be large. However, they are smaller in size now. Family member always get together at every festival. As for sports, one of the most popular sports in Italy are football. The Italian national team is one of the better in the world. Another popular sports include volleyball, basketball, boxing or bike riding.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I want to register attend a course about gardening so I have taken an interest in planting flowers since I was a little child. I especially like playing in the garden when I can enjoy the beauty of nature. First, I want to gain more knowledges of gardening so that they can help me to major in gardening at college. Second, I can actual realize the bitterness of the gardeners and treasured plants. After the graduation, I plan to devote my life to plant flowers. I'll turn my country into a more beautiful state, attracting most foreigners to come to visit it.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Health
Ladies and gentlemen, I'm honor to share the topic "health" with you. As a saying go, health is above wealth. You must feel the same way. Without health, we can't achieve that we set out to do. With health, how can we catch up with the rapidly changed world? In brief, health is anything.
To keep health, we should have a balanced diet, form good living habits, take on enough exercise and keep a good state of mind. In conclusion, I personal believe a healthy life is the source of happiness. So let's keep eye on our health and enjoy a healthy life. Thank you.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today our class paid a visit a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together by bus. The farm workers give us a warm welcome at the farm entrance, what moved us deeply. Then we were showing around the wonderful agricultural garden.
How happily we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we sat and had a picnic lunch in the sunshine, sharing snacks, fruit and drinks. After a ten-minute break, we had a great fun telling jokes and story, as well as singing and dancing. Two of them even played a game of chess.
Time went by quickly. After we knew it, it was already dark because we had to leave.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处, 多者 (从第 11 处起) 不计分。
Nowadays, the great number of people, especially young people, like ordering meals online. It's not surprised. First, as the pace of modern life is becoming faster and faster, people had less time to cook even one meal for themselves. Second, the development of technology bring us smart phones and new apps, what may lead to the increase in online service. However, we should pay more attention to food. As we all know it, our health is closely related to what we eat. Although the service provides us convenience, we must take the food safety to consideration. Home-made food is cleaner and healthier, but I prefer to cook food at home rather than ordering meals online.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Health is most important for any of us. In order to stay health, we need to know some common knowledge.
Firstly, we should eat lots of fruit and vegetable because they are rich in fiber and low in fat. When a proverb says," An apple a day keeps the doctor away." Secondly, exercise is necessary. Regular exercise can keep ourselves from getting fat. People do running every day usually have strongest hearts than those who don't. Final, form good living habits. We should sleep for about 8 hours every day. Overwork and little sleep will lead to ill. What's more, stay away cigarettes.
These are the things we should pay an attention to so as to keep fit.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, culture is similar with an iceberg. There are cultural rules where are obvious and easily to understand. Most of our cultural values, however, is not clear or hidden. For example, when you will visit a restaurant in Japan, chance are that people may sit on the floor and use chopsticks to eat. These eat habits are easy to come across. You may not know, therefore, that it's common for a man to sit cross-legged on the floor, but it's not considered acceptable for woman to do so. You have to study people's body language to understanding this less obvious cultural rule.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
To make us live a color school life and develop our creativity, our school holds a class uniform design competition the other day. The competition caught a great number of students attention. A total of 40 works were received, all of what were submitted through the Internet. There were various style of class uniforms. Some came from the inspiration of nature, and some were reflected class mottoes. According to online voting, the work presenting by Class 6, Senior 1 gained the most popularity because its unique design. The activity has become the real hit on campus and inspired more students to show our talents.
言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(人),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。
I was a high school student then, from low-income family. So I had to support my family. My first job is to clean the table in a small restaurant. I still remember going there early and feeling anxiously about the new world. I worked hard but I was afraid of losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired that I didn't want to do our homework. I came to understand that it was difficulty to earn money, and that knowledge could change into my life. And what I learned from the job was much more important than the knowledge learning from school.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I always have a dream to be a fluency speaker. Therefore, I am too shy to say a word in public. What is beyond my wildest imagination is fortune should bless me with a chance to realize my dream. One day, my English teacher asked me to go to her office and told us that I was given an opportunity to participate in an English speaking competition. Hear this, I could hardly hide my excitement. When making preparation for the competition, I write my speech carefully. I discussed it with my teacher and got many advice on how to improve it after I finished the composition. Under the help of my English teacher, I made a great progress.