增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(︿), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm writing to congratulate you of your winning first prize in the English short novel competition recently.
I must say that I am not surprised when I heard from the good news. I know that you have practised written English novels in the past years. I'm delighted to see efforts have finally been paid off. By the way, I am also fond of writing shorter passages in English. What upsets you most is that I sometimes can't find suitable word or expressions to make myself understood. Would you be kind enough to give me a few advice on improving this situation?
Congratulations again. I hope to get your reply as early as possibly.
