增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The coming-of age ceremony is held in our school in last month. During the ceremony, our headmaster congratulated us on step into the adult. He also reviewed the growth period what we had experienced. After that, they all watched the video of Chinese fighting against the epidemic.
Through the activity, what I feel are that I am able to shoulder the responsibility. It makes us adolescents strong and more determined as well. When face with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my works.
