增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(入),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Yesterday, when I complained to my mom about too little entertainment, she share the story of her youth with me. In the 1980s, neither ipads and smartphones were invented. Each time when evenings approached, the children around would crowd into the only house where had a television. We stared at the small screen until the program ended. Parent would make every effort to drag their children to bed when it was getting lately. But now, iPads and smartphones have taken place of televisions. No wonder my mom always says we are the generation grown up in a honey jar. After listening to my mom's story I felt lucky to live so a happy and comfortable life.