增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Although it was autumn, but the snow was already beginning to fall in Tibet. Along way children dressed in long wool coats stopped to look for us. The lakes shone like glass in the setting sun and looked wonderfully. To climb the mountains was hard work but as we found myself cycling through clouds.Then we had great funs climbing down the hills.
In the early evening, we always stopped, put up our tent and ate. After supper, Wang Wei went to sleep but I stayed wake, wondering what far we had already travelled. We can hardly wait to joining our cousins in Dali.
