增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（⋀），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每句不超过两个错误；
2）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。
I'm longing to join in this activity for an exchange student to Britain, because I think it's a good opportunity for me to improve my English or I can learn more about British history and its culture.
I have many hobby. I like surfing the Internet and do sports. In addition to, I'm good at drawing and I love listening to music. If I'm luckily enough to have the chance, I hoped I live in a friendly host family and that they are willing to take me to visit around often. I'm sure I can get well with them. I would appreciate it whether you could help me achieve our dream.
