1. (2022高三上·喀什月考) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Different students hold different view on whether we should start a blog on the Internet. Some believe it can provide with a colorful stage for students to show their talents. Also, it's nice way to help them relieving pressure. However, other have an opposite opinion over it.  They thought managing a blog will take much time and energy. Personally, I do approve of students having their own blogs. Nowadays, the Internet is playing an important part to our life. As high school students, it's necessary to learn and make the most of it. In fact, whether it's good or bad depend on how we employ it. If we can take fully advantage of it but avoid its negative effects, we can surely benefit a lot from it.