增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(l)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The most precious item I owns is my photo album. It is a record of my life and contains a lot fond memories. There were pictures of many important moments in my life, such as my first day of school or the time when I completed a marathon. The photo also remind me of happy moments with people that I love, one of which is of me hug my grandmother at my 10th birthday party. She was passed away a few years ago, but this photo helps me remember him. My photo album holds many dearly memories like this one, and that is what it is the most precious item that I own.
