增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The photo was taken during the sixty anniversary of our school. The elderly man on the picture attended our school 50 years ago, shortly after it founded. It was the first time he has been back to our school from he graduated and he was deeply impressed by its look. Once a young student, the elderly man now has gray hair or wrinkles, while our school has a new and more modem look. After all these years, he's still emotional when talking about that how proud he is of once being a student of our school. I was great touched by the scene. I know someday I'll have a same feeling as this lovely man.
