Miya, aged nine, and her sixyearold sister Tiffany were in the swimming pool in the back garden of their house in Grandwille, USA. Their father David was with (they). It was a lovely day. There wasn't a cloud in the sky.
Suddenly David shouted. He was trouble. It was his legs. His legs weren't right. He was in pain. Then he was under the water. The girls weren't scared but they were (worry). Was it a joke or was he really in danger? Twenty seconds later he was under the water. Now Miya was scared.
There was no time (wait). In seconds, Miya was under the water with her father. He was heavy but with the help of the water, she was able to pull him to one side of the pool. Now his head was out of the water. He was alive he wasn't conscious(有意识的). Tiffany called 911 as (quick)as possible. Ten minutes later, doctors came. Soon their father was conscious . The girls were happy to see that.
David still doesn't know was wrong with his legs on that day. But he knows that his daughters were (hero) and thanks them every day for saving his life. He is a very proud father.
